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MessiahForHire
Mishief and Mayhem
Posts: 178
Join date: 2008-03-06
Location: Somewhere
 |  Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1  Thu Mar 06, 2008 8:33 pm | |
| Also, you misspelled "sauce" in page 11... 
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Pale white and black with false citrine, imperfect white and red,
The peacock's feather in bright colours, the rainbow in the sky above,
The spotted panther, the green lion, the crow's beak blue as lead,
These shall appear before you in perfect white, with many others.
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Lady Buggin
Queen Bee
Posts: 410
Join date: 2008-03-06
Age: 24
Location: Buggin out, dude!
| | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 8:43 pm | |
| god damn it xD. I keep doing thing in Microsoft work just to avoid this kinda crap xD and this stuff happens. Oh well no one noticed till now XD. _________________ - Christina Prince  Emo kid: "OMG the world sucks! You don't understand my pain! I'm dieing on the inside! whaa whaa whaa!" Me: "Oh yeah, well here's a knife, make sure you're dieing on the outside too, to match ! |
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MessiahForHire
Mishief and Mayhem
Posts: 178
Join date: 2008-03-06
Location: Somewhere
| | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 8:45 pm | |
| I noticed before, I only remembered now. :D
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Pale white and black with false citrine, imperfect white and red,
The peacock's feather in bright colours, the rainbow in the sky above,
The spotted panther, the green lion, the crow's beak blue as lead,
These shall appear before you in perfect white, with many others.
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Lady Buggin
Queen Bee
Posts: 410
Join date: 2008-03-06
Age: 24
Location: Buggin out, dude!
| | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 8:47 pm | |
| too bad, I blame stupid Microsoft word for being stupid xD. _________________ - Christina Prince Emo kid: "OMG the world sucks! You don't understand my pain! I'm dieing on the inside! whaa whaa whaa!" Me: "Oh yeah, well here's a knife, make sure you're dieing on the outside too, to match ! |
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Drache
Lady Admin
Posts: 307
Join date: 2008-03-05
Age: 25
Location: Away more than I'd like
| | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Wed Mar 12, 2008 3:30 am | |
| I misspell things all the time ^.^. Don't worry about it too much.
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BladedFalcon
Old Fashioned Merc.
Posts: 154
Join date: 2008-03-06
Age: 21
Location: Mexico
| | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Wed Mar 12, 2008 3:39 am | |
| heh, dont even get ME started, i think im the king of misspelling in the DD forums, speaking english? no prob, but have me write it and i have as much dexterty as a spider trying to slide in ice
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MessiahForHire
Mishief and Mayhem
Posts: 178
Join date: 2008-03-06
Location: Somewhere
| | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Wed Mar 12, 2008 12:10 pm | |
| Actually, I don't notice many spelling errors, you just don't capitalize any. 
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Pale white and black with false citrine, imperfect white and red,
The peacock's feather in bright colours, the rainbow in the sky above,
The spotted panther, the green lion, the crow's beak blue as lead,
These shall appear before you in perfect white, with many others.
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Drache
Lady Admin
Posts: 307
Join date: 2008-03-05
Age: 25
Location: Away more than I'd like
| | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Wed Mar 12, 2008 6:04 pm | |
| I hope we see more of Dr. Anthony Marx in the first chapter. He seemed cool.
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MessiahForHire
Mishief and Mayhem
Posts: 178
Join date: 2008-03-06
Location: Somewhere
| | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Wed Mar 12, 2008 6:23 pm | |
| We probably will, he's in the cast section, so he musn't be that minor a character.
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Pale white and black with false citrine, imperfect white and red,
The peacock's feather in bright colours, the rainbow in the sky above,
The spotted panther, the green lion, the crow's beak blue as lead,
These shall appear before you in perfect white, with many others.
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BladedFalcon
Old Fashioned Merc.
Posts: 154
Join date: 2008-03-06
Age: 21
Location: Mexico
| | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 13, 2008 1:33 am | |
| well, he indeed seems to be an interesting guy, i believe we weill much more about every character shown here in due time, the cuestion is how much will it take? XD
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Lady Buggin
Queen Bee
Posts: 410
Join date: 2008-03-06
Age: 24
Location: Buggin out, dude!
| | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 13, 2008 2:10 am | |
| | Drache wrote: | | I hope we see more of Dr. Anthony Marx in the first chapter. He seemed cool. |
Don't worry you will :3_________________ - Christina Prince Emo kid: "OMG the world sucks! You don't understand my pain! I'm dieing on the inside! whaa whaa whaa!" Me: "Oh yeah, well here's a knife, make sure you're dieing on the outside too, to match ! |
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Drache
Lady Admin
Posts: 307
Join date: 2008-03-05
Age: 25
Location: Away more than I'd like
| | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Wed Mar 19, 2008 7:45 pm | |
| I totally forgot to comment on it earlier but the Saint Patrick Day art was awesome. I also really like Jennette's expression in the last panel in today's update.
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Lady Buggin
Queen Bee
Posts: 410
Join date: 2008-03-06
Age: 24
Location: Buggin out, dude!
| | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Wed Mar 19, 2008 10:36 pm | |
| "'Cause we find ourselves in the same 'ol mess singin' Drunken Lullabies!" xD _________________ - Christina Prince Emo kid: "OMG the world sucks! You don't understand my pain! I'm dieing on the inside! whaa whaa whaa!" Me: "Oh yeah, well here's a knife, make sure you're dieing on the outside too, to match ! |
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Ark
Posts: 43
Join date: 2008-03-08
Age: 20
| | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 20, 2008 2:13 pm | |
| Hmmm... I get this weird vibe from Marx, I'm not sure what it is... |
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Lady Buggin
Queen Bee
Posts: 410
Join date: 2008-03-06
Age: 24
Location: Buggin out, dude!
| | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 20, 2008 4:05 pm | |
| Heehee maybe you were tapping into my brain this morning. I came up with some interesting things surrounding him xD. _________________ - Christina Prince Emo kid: "OMG the world sucks! You don't understand my pain! I'm dieing on the inside! whaa whaa whaa!" Me: "Oh yeah, well here's a knife, make sure you're dieing on the outside too, to match ! |
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