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Lady Buggin Queen Bee


Posts: 410 Join date: 2008-03-06 Age: 24 Location: Buggin out, dude!
 | Subject: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:36 am | |
| Disucuss the contents of the Introduction and Chapter 1 here. Feel free to post questions, comments, and critiques.  I will love them all as my own children. _________________ - Christina Prince  Emo kid: "OMG the world sucks! You don't understand my pain! I'm dieing on the inside! whaa whaa whaa!" Me: "Oh yeah, well here's a knife, make sure you're dieing on the outside too, to match  ! |
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BladedFalcon Old Fashioned Merc.


Posts: 154 Join date: 2008-03-06 Age: 21 Location: Mexico
 | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:42 am | |
| wooh! i just finished the intro chapter! gotta say, the comic is shaping up nicely, like the humor, im still not sure what kind of plot will have overall yet, but it seems to be going nicely enough, hope you give each race unique traits and quirks! Also, gratituous nudity! hehe, im not complaining, it certainly not bothers me and its something not many comic artists have the guts to do, but i sense this will be a heated point of debate in the future... |
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Lady Buggin Queen Bee


Posts: 410 Join date: 2008-03-06 Age: 24 Location: Buggin out, dude!
 | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:44 am | |
| Yeah some people were like "YAY" others were like "was that REALLY necessary?" you can't please everyone I suppose. All i know is that it was fun and interesting to draw. Still i probably wont be doing too many more of those, only if it somehow plays into the plot easily. Glad you're enjoying it so far :) _________________ - Christina Prince  Emo kid: "OMG the world sucks! You don't understand my pain! I'm dieing on the inside! whaa whaa whaa!" Me: "Oh yeah, well here's a knife, make sure you're dieing on the outside too, to match  ! |
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BladedFalcon Old Fashioned Merc.


Posts: 154 Join date: 2008-03-06 Age: 21 Location: Mexico
 | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:48 am | |
| haha yeah, i thinks its not bad seing those as long as it serves the plot, not just for the sake of fanservice, but yeah, i will be ranting about chapter one soon.. this is still a young comic |
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Lady Buggin Queen Bee


Posts: 410 Join date: 2008-03-06 Age: 24 Location: Buggin out, dude!
 | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:55 am | |
| Yup, but to be fair this is the longest I've ever done a comic xD. And I suppose since I've come this far, why stop (I have many more pages drawn than what is posted online, I'm near the end of chapter 2 as far as drawing goes) Tryting to draw as much as possible. _________________ - Christina Prince  Emo kid: "OMG the world sucks! You don't understand my pain! I'm dieing on the inside! whaa whaa whaa!" Me: "Oh yeah, well here's a knife, make sure you're dieing on the outside too, to match  ! |
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BladedFalcon Old Fashioned Merc.


Posts: 154 Join date: 2008-03-06 Age: 21 Location: Mexico
 | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:58 am | |
| haha yeah, dont give up on this one, it has potential... plus, it has a nice and flaming new board! it would be a shame let it go to waste.. |
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Drache Lady Admin


Posts: 307 Join date: 2008-03-05 Age: 25 Location: Away more than I'd like
 | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:02 am | |
| I'm obviously a fan of the comic so far (huh, who would have guessed XD). I didn't really mind the early sex scene. There was a warning for it if I really had felt like figuring out how to skip it. What I love the most about this comic so far are the character designs. Very original art! I'm also interested in the species dynamic. I hope the comic and forum continues.
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BladedFalcon Old Fashioned Merc.


Posts: 154 Join date: 2008-03-06 Age: 21 Location: Mexico
 | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:33 am | |
| seconded! also, finished reading the comic, you know christie.. i think i could manage to get all the translations of the strips so far by the weekend, somehow i tought this comic was older, and obviously longer, but i think i can handle it so far. i will send you the transaltion of the firts 3 strips today as a preview to see if you like the way i do it, so be sure to check that later! |
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Lady Buggin Queen Bee


Posts: 410 Join date: 2008-03-06 Age: 24 Location: Buggin out, dude!
 | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:36 am | |
| gotcha, I look forward to seeing them. :). and yeah I wasn't originally going to do a lot of racial stuff at first, as the spiders are the only race with an openly horrific past. but we'll see. _________________ - Christina Prince  Emo kid: "OMG the world sucks! You don't understand my pain! I'm dieing on the inside! whaa whaa whaa!" Me: "Oh yeah, well here's a knife, make sure you're dieing on the outside too, to match  ! |
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MessiahForHire Mishief and Mayhem


Posts: 178 Join date: 2008-03-06 Location: Somewhere
 | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:37 am | |
| That pretty much sums it up... Also, do you have a specific update time? Or do you just update anytime Mon/Wed/Fri, Buggy? |
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Lady Buggin Queen Bee


Posts: 410 Join date: 2008-03-06 Age: 24 Location: Buggin out, dude!
 | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:41 am | |
| Anytime MWF, since the auto update is kinda screwy. It will probably happen between 9 - 10 est though, as thats when i get to work and have finished all my settling ins. _________________ - Christina Prince  Emo kid: "OMG the world sucks! You don't understand my pain! I'm dieing on the inside! whaa whaa whaa!" Me: "Oh yeah, well here's a knife, make sure you're dieing on the outside too, to match  ! |
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MessiahForHire Mishief and Mayhem


Posts: 178 Join date: 2008-03-06 Location: Somewhere
 | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:51 am | |
| Ah. Okay then.  It's also great how you add in random, irrelevant comments in there... Like on page... 12, you wrote "pancakes <3" then an arrow pointing at them... :3 |
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Lady Buggin Queen Bee


Posts: 410 Join date: 2008-03-06 Age: 24 Location: Buggin out, dude!
 | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 4:06 am | |
| Haahaa yeah you'll see that every once in a while, if I feel it needs to be done. Or if one couldn't tell what something was, like those ever heard to draw messy stack of pan cakes. _________________ - Christina Prince  Emo kid: "OMG the world sucks! You don't understand my pain! I'm dieing on the inside! whaa whaa whaa!" Me: "Oh yeah, well here's a knife, make sure you're dieing on the outside too, to match  ! |
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MessiahForHire Mishief and Mayhem


Posts: 178 Join date: 2008-03-06 Location: Somewhere
 | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 4:11 am | |
| ...I would have added a comment, but I forgot what it was. The  smiley is way too distracting! >.< :3 _________________ Pale white and black with false citrine, imperfect white and red, The peacock's feather in bright colours, the rainbow in the sky above, The spotted panther, the green lion, the crow's beak blue as lead, These shall appear before you in perfect white, with many others.
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Lady Buggin Queen Bee


Posts: 410 Join date: 2008-03-06 Age: 24 Location: Buggin out, dude!
 | Subject: Re: Introduction and Chapter 1 Thu Mar 06, 2008 4:12 am | |
| Haahaa I know, itsn't it cute? It is the bringer of doom... _________________ - Christina Prince  Emo kid: "OMG the world sucks! You don't understand my pain! I'm dieing on the inside! whaa whaa whaa!" Me: "Oh yeah, well here's a knife, make sure you're dieing on the outside too, to match  ! |
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