Introduction and Chapter 1

Disucuss the contents of the Introduction and Chapter 1 here. Feel free to post questions, comments, and critiques. I will love them all as my own children.

wooh! i just finished the intro chapter! gotta say, the comic is shaping up nicely, like the humor, im still not sure what kind of plot will have overall yet, but it seems to be going nicely enough, hope you give each race unique traits and quirks!

Also, gratituous nudity! hehe, im not complaining, it certainly not bothers me and its something not many comic artists have the guts to do, but i sense this will be a heated point of debate in the future...

Yeah some people were like "YAY" others were like "was that REALLY necessary?" you can't please everyone I suppose. All i know is that it was fun and interesting to draw. Still i probably wont be doing too many more of those, only if it somehow plays into the plot easily. Glad you're enjoying it so far :)

haha yeah, i thinks its not bad seing those as long as it serves the plot, not just for the sake of fanservice, but yeah, i will be ranting about chapter one soon.. this is still a young comic

Yup, but to be fair this is the longest I've ever done a comic xD. And I suppose since I've come this far, why stop (I have many more pages drawn than what is posted online, I'm near the end of chapter 2 as far as drawing goes) Tryting to draw as much as possible.

haha yeah, dont give up on this one, it has potential... plus, it has a nice and flaming new board! it would be a shame let it go to waste..

I'm obviously a fan of the comic so far (huh, who would have guessed XD). I didn't really mind the early sex scene. There was a warning for it if I really had felt like figuring out how to skip it. What I love the most about this comic so far are the character designs. Very original art! I'm also interested in the species dynamic. I hope the comic and forum continues.

seconded!

also, finished reading the comic, you know christie.. i think i could manage to get all the translations of the strips so far by the weekend, somehow i tought this comic was older, and obviously longer, but i think i can handle it so far.

i will send you the transaltion of the firts 3 strips today as a preview to see if you like the way i do it, so be sure to check that later!

gotcha, I look forward to seeing them. :). and yeah I wasn't originally going to do a lot of racial stuff at first, as the spiders are the only race with an openly horrific past. but we'll see.

That pretty much sums it up...

Also, do you have a specific update time? Or do you just update anytime Mon/Wed/Fri, Buggy?

Anytime MWF, since the auto update is kinda screwy. It will probably happen between 9 - 10 est though, as thats when i get to work and have finished all my settling ins.

Ah. Okay then. It's also great how you add in random, irrelevant comments in there... Like on page... 12, you wrote "pancakes <3" then an arrow pointing at them... :3

Haahaa yeah you'll see that every once in a while, if I feel it needs to be done. Or if one couldn't tell what something was, like those ever heard to draw messy stack of pan cakes.

...I would have added a comment, but I forgot what it was. The smiley is way too distracting! >.< :3

Haahaa I know, itsn't it cute? It is the bringer of doom...

Also, you misspelled "sauce" in page 11...

god damn it xD. I keep doing thing in Microsoft work just to avoid this kinda crap xD and this stuff happens. Oh well no one noticed till now XD.

I noticed before, I only remembered now. :D

too bad, I blame stupid Microsoft word for being stupid xD.

I misspell things all the time ^.^. Don't worry about it too much.

heh, dont even get ME started, i think im the king of misspelling in the DD forums, speaking english? no prob, but have me write it and i have as much dexterty as a spider trying to slide in ice

Actually, I don't notice many spelling errors, you just don't capitalize any.

I hope we see more of Dr. Anthony Marx in the first chapter. He seemed cool.

We probably will, he's in the cast section, so he musn't be that minor a character.

well, he indeed seems to be an interesting guy, i believe we weill much more about every character shown here in due time, the cuestion is how much will it take? XD